The Inhalation of Truth, Exhales all Doubt (376 hits)
Inhale, I can slowing feel my soul soaring as I slip deeper in desperation to find myself. I let it go, within the walls of my heart I find the courage to conquer the unknown, ground my foundation. Inhale, I am not afraid of the dark, the truth hides in the shadows, what is broken will be fixed, the truth will set my mind free. On this journey to find salvation I met a wise man that said, 'If you give all your love to another what do you have left for yourself." What I did not understand then I know now. I have to love me first then I can love another, so I exhale and let it go, the rest is history. I am the Queen of the Nile, I stand , when other before me have fallen. I will not be moved. I am one hundred percent woman. The heavens smile down upon me, in the darkness I found her and she found me. The truth was always better then the lie. I am the warrior and I am undefeated. Blood and tears, the road to greatness is rugged and dangerous, But I shall not be moved. Exhale, peace be with you all. -Much love Ladies always
This reads like a poem...I like this
Thursday, April 21st 2011 at 11:45AM
Siebra Muhammad
Thanks for the comment Siebra, this is a poem I wrote, I usually dont share, Since I am a member of this site, I decided I could get some feedback good or bad about my writing style. Ladies feel free to comment good or bad it will help in the long run thank you
Friday, April 22nd 2011 at 9:18PM
Dawn Feagin